UDPATE: Eh, I'm taking this down . . . not only did it have a bunch of typos, but they were significantly obscuring my meaning on a subject where it's worth being clear. What I wanted to do was link to Nicholas Kristof's observation that "Democrats are railing at just about everything President Bush does, with one prominent exception: Mr. Bush’s crushing embrace of Israel."
Then I wanted to draw a distinction between two kinds of Democrats. One are Democrats who aren't railing at Bush's Israel policy because they agree with Bush's Israel policy. The other kind are Democrats who do disagree with Bush's Israel policy but who are trying to signal that fact quietly, rather than railing about it, because they think it's too politically risky to rail.


I thought this post was really hard to read.
Someone funny than the downright pandering of those inclined to pander, is the effort to say-it-and-hope-nobody-hears from the timid.
Did you mean to write "somewhat funnier" instead of "someone funny"? I think that's the easiest way to turn this into an actual sentence that, like, makes sense. Speaking of "like," I was really confused by this. I don't read Timesselect columnists and don't share all of your political convictions and annoyances, so I don't understand why Kristof's claim is funny on the face of it, which you seem to imply. That may be my fault. The oddness of that sentence isn't, though.
Barack Obama seems to be trying to like send secret messages to folks inclined toward my way of thinking...
You're, like, trying to be whimsical with that "like," right? It's easier to tell if the word is offset by commas, methinks. Otherwise, it makes for a really weird looking sentence, especially with that hotlink blue there. I prefer my links smaller, but that's just a stylistic thing. I'd have just made the offset-by-commas "like" or else "secret messages" blue and hot. I think it's more dramatic and effective that way, but that's just me.
messages sufficiently clear that one can plausibly deny they've been sent.
These too-clear messages are ones that the Obama campaign cann't plausibly deny, right? I'm pretty confused by this point, but I'm pretty sure I'm right. Scary messages that are so clear that I can pretend they meant something else, that doesn't make sense, right?
Posted by Tyler Simons | March 18, 2007 12:06 PM