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Fictions and Falshoods

05 Mar 2008 11:13 am

I'm reading Ross talking about another first-person non-fiction narrative that turns out to be B.S. and it's making me think of how a lot of old-school novels involve this pretense to accuracy. Often they'll begin with a narrator telling the "true" story of how he heard the story that makes up the heart of the plot. Or else the manuscript will be discovered somewhere. For reasons that I'm sure are well known to people who were paying more attention in lecture, early audiences seem to have been incapable of digesting something like "this is a story I made up because I thought you would get something out of reading it -- enjoy!" Instead, prose had to be true.

Meanwhile, contemporary fiction is pretty sharply bifurcated between crappy "genre" fiction and literary fiction that often seems very artsy-fartsy. For a well-crafted but basically straightforward story of people doing things and interacting with each other in a moderately realistic way, you need to turn to narrative non-fiction. You can tell people you've just been reading Bill Buford's Heat and hold your head high in sophisticated circles, it's not like copping to owning Tom Clancy's Op-Center: State of Siege.

But if you sold the story as fiction, I think it would be deemed inadequately literary. And yet the facticity of the narrative has nothing to do with anything. Do I actually care if Buford really sliced his finger dicing carrots that one time? Or if Dario the butcher really yelled at some restaurant owner in some other Tuscan town? To me it seems basically irrelevant. The verisimilitude of a lot of the mise en scène really is integral to the book's appeal, but the same could be said about Moby Dick and any number of other straightforwardly fictional works. The literal accuracy of the whole thing, by contrast, contributes very little to the actual work. What it does instead is alter the marketing possibilities and likely critical approaches, opening up space for a certain kind of narrative to be taken seriously. Which isn't to say that people should lie in their memoirs, but maybe there's something to be learned from the fact that there's such an appetite for made-up stories of a certain kind.

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The pretense of truth keeps the reader from challenging the premises. "Fargo" was very good in this way because its claim that the story was true allowed the viewers to stay engaged when they would have otherwise dismissed some of the scenes as ridiculous or unlikely... and this creates better word of mouth, because readers will tell their friends, "wow! what a harrowing story," rather than, "the book insulted my intelligence with its contrivances!"

I hate the "anti-narrative" direction literary fiction has gone in the past while (Ian Macewan's "Atonement" is sort of a commentary on this). It's almost as if a "straight story" -- a narrative -- is looked down upon.

Of all the things I've seen on Matt's ever written here, this is the one I disagree with most. The conventional-wisdom cheapshots taken at contemporary fiction are totally wrong-headed in their willingness to scorn a complex "artsy-fartsy" presentation when in the finest cases, the complexity is integral to the theme of the work. There is certainly a range of quality on offer today, just as there has been for the whole history of the novel.

Interesting that you should cite Moby Dick as a "straightforwardly fictional work." It's also a shining example of the phenomenon you point out in the first paragraph, a work of fiction "done up" with the trappings of a "true story." Those trappings are just as critical as the freer-form elements of Toni Morrison or the non-traditional narrative in works by writers like Louise Erdrich and Leslie Marmon Silko.

My friend Falshood and I have discussed this very topic many times while puffing the hookah and drinking Turkish coffee. He is a very truthful man, Falshood is.

Re the content of the post: yes, I basically agree. To a lot of people, there's something about a story being true that somehow makes it more interesting. (Q.v., Thomas Hardy's line about the bag of bones.)

I suppose this phenomenon also contributes to the popularity of reality TV, which straddles a similar fact/artifice divide.

Memoir is actually one of the most popular forms of contemporary literature, and I think Matt hits on why this is so. A story gains automatic "serious" points for being true. Also, a less engaging story becomes automatically more engaging when you know that everything in it supposedly really happened.

However, as a literary form, I'd personally put memoir well beneath "literary" fiction and genre fiction. That's not to say that there aren't amazingly great memoirs (Angela's Ashes comes to mind). There are, of course amazingly contemporary great genre works and even great contemporary "literary" works, so why not?

Snobs like to put down the entire cannon of genre fiction with a sniff as Matt does here and I find that sort of thing to be staggeringly ignorant. Sure, there's a lot of crap out there. But even a lot of the real crap genre works show a knack for story and plot that would be entirely lost on the Foster Wallaces and Proulxes of the world.

Matt, don't hate on genre fiction. Shakespeare wrote the equivalent of genre fiction in his time.

"crappy 'genre' fiction?"

Sure, a lot of books--like a lot of movies and television--are crap, but there is plenty of good stuff out there.

Just because you liberal elitists are too snooty to read good contemporary sci-fi like 1632 or Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell doesn't make it crappy.

I'd like to add that in the case of a fabricated memoir, the fabrication MATTERS. A real memoir relies on its memoir-hood just like Moby Dick relies on its faux memoir-hood, so taking away the truth of the memoir would be like adding an alien invasion to Moby Dick.

Someone who starts a sentence with the phrase "The verisimilitude of a lot of the mise en scène..." maybe shouldn't criticize anything as being "artsy fartsy."

Also, "facticity"? Is that like truthiness?

Just because you liberal elitists are too snooty to read good contemporary sci-fi like 1632 or Jonathan Strange & Mr. Norrell doesn't make it crappy.

Just because you fanboy elitists engage in uncalled-for pre-emptive ad hominem attacks doesn't make Jonathan Strange a good book, either.

Meanwhile, contemporary fiction is pretty sharply bifurcated between crappy "genre" fiction and literary fiction that often seems very artsy-fartsy.

You know, Matt, you complain that your commenters don't like you, but sometimes I swear you're going out of your way to piss them off. This is really a deeply dumb and untrue thing to say. Contemporary "literary" fiction is much more narrative than it was, say, in the days of Woolf, Joyce, and Proust. You may not like it (and I confess to preferring Woolf and Proust, personally), but how about some examples of just what the hell you think you're talking about?

Meanwhile, what exactly are comics if not genre fiction? And I know you read and appreciate comics.

Also, "facticity"? Is that like truthiness?

From Wikipedia:

Heidegger discusses facticity as the thrownness (Geworfenheit) of individual existence. By this, he is not only referring to a brute fact, or the factuality of a concrete historical situation, e.g., "born in the 50's." Facticity is something that already informs and has been taken up in existence, even if it is unnoticed or left unattended. As such, facticity is not something we come across and directly behold. In moods, for example, facticity has an enigmatic appearance, which involves both turning toward and away from it. For Heidegger, moods are conditions of thinking and willing to which they must in some way respond. The thrownness of human existence (or Dasein) is accordingly disclosed through moods.

I'm pretty sure this is what Matt had in mind.

Contemporary "literary" fiction is much more narrative than it was, say, in the days of Woolf, Joyce, and Proust.

Which were also the days of Fitzgerald, Hemingway, and Conrad. I respectfuly request we please not have this thread turn into a flame war about what "contemporary fiction" is or isn't. For the last hundred years, the range of voices and styles in fiction writing has been sufficiently diverse that trying to generalize about all of them seems absolutely pointless.

NBA Basketball is terrible genre fiction, imho.

"bifurcated between crappy "genre" fiction and literary fiction that often seems very artsy-fartsy"

Cormac McCarthy, Ian McEwan, Alice McDermott, Elmore Leonard, Junot Diaz, Harlan Coben, George Pelecanos, Dennis Lehane, Richard Price and about 100 other authors would like a word with you.

Oh, and one more thing: Moby Dick is supposed to be a "straightforward" narrative? Are you kidding?

Like Antid Oto I'm puzzled by this sentence: "Meanwhile, contemporary fiction is pretty sharply bifurcated between crappy "genre" fiction and literary fiction that often seems very artsy-fartsy."

There are some literary writers that are very anti-plot, in the tradition of Joyce and Proust, but that is not at all what most contemporary literary fiction is like. In fact, the main trend of recent years has been for literary writers to try and appropriate the energy of genre fiction and write plot-heavy fiction: look at Philip Roth (writing an alternative history novel The Plot Against America), John Updike (a thriller called terrorist), Michael Chabon (the fantasy-adventure book he wrote) or Margaret Atwood (repeatedly influenced by science fiction). The wall between genre and the literary doesn't really exist now in the way that it did in the 1920s or 1930s.

Readers experience a story more intensely if they believe it's true, because knowing it's fiction is a kind of emotional distance. For this reason, unsophisticated readers want to believe their favorite stories are true, and learning that they're not true "ruins it" for them.

Which were also the days of Fitzgerald, Hemingway, and Conrad. I respectfuly request we please not have this thread turn into a flame war about what "contemporary fiction" is or isn't. For the last hundred years, the range of voices and styles in fiction writing has been sufficiently diverse that trying to generalize about all of them seems absolutely pointless.

Fair enough.

I have met people who were outraged to learn (while searching for the unabridged Princess Bride that S. Morgenstern is a fictional character.

The difference between memoir and fiction certainly affects marketing and things like book tours -- "Come see the privileged young white woman who made up the story about the young girl of color with connections to the Bloods" is pretty different from "Come meet the ex gang-banger who wrote a searing memoir".

Among The Thugs by Buford is a much better book than Heat (and I liked Heat!)

Don't publishers ask writers to rework their novels into memoirs now for sales reasons?

You are way off on the bifurcation, Matt.

About autobiography vrs. ficiton, fiction has more potential becasue story is about shaping experience into something meaningful. If you are starting off with your life story and want to call it autobiography, then you have to stick pretty closely to the actual events. With fiction, you can create whatever events you want to suit the overall maening. I believe that's why very few autobiographys are ever considered great art. The Education of Henry Adams is the only one I can think of.

And about narrative vrs. non-narrative, there is very little "non" narrative fiction (I believe matt is using narrative in the sense of story or plot here). It's just that some fiction plays with the conventions or puts more value into language that plot. But even Ulysses has a narrative (plot, story) buiried under all the word fun.

My wife was a big David Sedaris fan when she thought the stories were real. But when she found he may have embellished some parts, things she used to find laugh out loud funny are now only mildly amusing.

There's a different level of enjoyment and wonder between memoir and fiction. A memoir leaves the reader feeling the characters are working within the limitations of what human beings can actually do and experience, whereas fiction is only limited by the imagination. So things which are plausible but unrealistic can be put forth in memoirs, and they are even more powerful because we imagine someone not unlike ourselves actually experiencing it.

Well, I myself was pretty disappointed when it was revealed that Jenna Jameson's How to Make Love Like a Pornstar was wholly a product of the imagination and that she is in fact a 20 year old home-schooled virgin from Muncie, Indiana who stumbled upon a couple of porn videos hidden in her father's liquor cabinet.

The verisimilitude of a lot of the mise en scène really is integral to the book's appeal, but the same could be said about Moby Dick and any number of other straightforwardly fictional works.

This reminds me of something else ... now what was it? Oh yes, this. Come on, Matt, you can do better than this. (Unless by "straightforwardly" you mean "constantly interrupted by cetological treatises, at least when not being interrupted by the explanation of ropes/decks/holds/&c.")

Mike: you've met Fred Savage?

I think the distinction is simpler than Matt makes it. Memoirs are allowed to have "happy" endings--by which I don't mean smiley-face-happy but that the person writing the memoir grew/learned/changed and the reader may derive some satisfaction from the results. Respectable fiction is not allowed to do the same--only chick lit and other shabby genres for stupid people are allowed to have emotionally satisfying outcomes.

Great onion citation by SEK.

Matt's analogy to Defoe is pretty on-target -- I believe it's mostly Defoe he has in mind when he talks about the "early novel."

Actually, the conditions that shaped fictional "non-fiction" in Defoe's time aren't too different from the conditions in ours. There was plenty of fiction that embraced its status as "romance," and didn't pretend too seriously to be "real." Either because it was poetic (see our "literary fiction") or because it adhered to the conventions of adventure (see our "genre fiction").

The novel is originally an effort to break out of that box. Plus ça change, etc.


Readers experience a story more intensely if they believe it's true, because knowing it's fiction is a kind of emotional distance. For this reason, unsophisticated readers want to believe their favorite stories are true, and learning that they're not true "ruins it" for them.

There seems to be an irrationality about this b/c you know the details are going to be made up anyhow. And maybe even many of the general themes. The artsy-fartsy crowd gets upset for a different reason, though. For them, the author is actually relevant to the significance of the work. This applies regardless of whether you're talking about memoirs or not. For example, this is the only reason Toni Morrison's Beloved is so popular. I found the book totally implausible and non-sensical. The book requires, fundamentally, that you believe that the author has a reasonably plausible understanding of the slave experience. If the author is white, that book doesn't work.

...straightforward story of people doing things and interacting with each other in a moderately realistic way

I interact with people in a moderately realistic way as a matter of course. When I have time to read, I'd like something different. Genre fiction, by the way, isn't automatically crappy. Graham Greene and John Le Carre come to mind immediately. As does Ross MacDonald. And a host of others that previous comments have cited. I would suggest that English literature begins with genre fiction: Beowulf. You can take it a step further and argue that Western culture begins with genre fiction: Homer


Sorry, in what way does Moby Dick pretend to be non-fiction? It contains the internal monologues of people who manifestly are in no position to have reported them (because they're dead)! Did anyone actually read Moby Dick and think it was really the memoirs of Herman Melville, alias "Ishmael", who once sailed on a ship called the Pequod? You'd have a better case that Dracula pretends to be non fiction...

Read Stewart O'Nan's A Prayer for the Dying.

Artsy.
Fartsy.
Awesome.

mpowell,

I'll spare a few words on Beloved. Of course, I disagree completely with what you say.

Focusing on the "core" part of the book rather than the other brilliant elements, a woman is driven to kill her child rather than see her re-enslaved. The characters who witness this or figure it out later see Sethe as a monster or at least someone committed a monstrous sin. But Sethe is not the monster; she is a conventional "good mother" character. And when a good mother is confronted by the real monster, slavery, she does whatever needs to be done to protect her daughter from it.

Furthermore, the theme goes, slavery doesn't just end. In the central chapters of the book, the narrative shifts to Sethe's own childhood and her mother and the chain of events (loosely conceived) which enslaved her. It's clear the enslavement persists in Sethe and Denver (only Beloved is free of it--her ego is intact). It's a powerful statement that slavery was not a monstrous sin washed away by the Emancipation Proclamation or even the blood of 640,000 people in the Civil War or the Civil Rights Act or anything. We can beat about the bushes of redemption, but slavery is the original sin of this country and it is unredeemed, no matter what Julia Ward Howe would have us believe.

Sorry, in what way does Moby Dick pretend to be non-fiction?

Only every other chapter. Sure, the narrative is fictional, but the disquisitions on the finer parts of whale anatomy, ship-building, rope-weaving, &c. are designed to create verisimilitude. Also, the story's based on [SPOILER ALERT!] the sinking of the Essex by a sperm whale. The pretensions of fact are all there, but Melville wasn't trying to sell the narrative as factual -- he wanted it to pass muster as a truth, because it was telling A Big Truth.

Sturgeon's Law would be really helpful to remember here: "Sure, 90% of science fiction is crud. That's because 90% of everything is crud."

This applies to "artsy" literary fiction -- maybe a lot of it is too precious, but you judge the best. And it applies, obviously, to genre fiction of all types. If you judge the best of literary fiction against the average genre work, that's not a fair comparison.

And, I agree with those pointing out the mainstream fiction and genre fiction are mixed up together like the cherry and vanilla ice cream in a pint of Cherry Garcia. You can tell them apart, but there is no distinct boundary. I don't think I've read a mainstream literary novel in ten years that didn't have something like alternate history, magical realism, persistent references to fantasy, gothic atmosphere, science fictional near-future inventions, etc. All fiction is genre fiction to some extent.

The problem with "straight stories" is that there are plenty of them, great ones, and not everyone is interested in reading or writing the same straight stories over and over again. I would never say that those who choose to read or write them should stop; sadly, that's a courtesy not paid back in kind. Those who lionize the straight store (or the "realist" novel, a bullshit taxonomy if there ever was one) insist on doing it to the exclusion of trying something else. They're the ones declaring the limits of art, not the experimentalists.

Well I disagree on the first part, necessarily. Look at why Tolkien did it (yes I know it's cheating to consider his work literature): he always said he didn't invent the world, he just discovered it. When he wrote LotR he wasn't so much telling the story, as following something already there that he ended up transcribing. In his re-writes he considers it something more like "When I looked at it, I felt it was not right, and then I realized what REALLY happened."

It's a sub-creation thing. I know thats how I do it. I have to create a world and find what stories are in it to tell, not the other way around. But I have to believe that those stories are "real" in that world or what I write suffers.

Hey, art is about truth and beauty, memoirs are about what happened to someone. If you want some truth read , Pamuk's Snow (Kurdish Turks) or Saramago's Blindness (consequences of fear). Coetzee, O'Nan, Faulkner, Morrison and others mentioned above are also full of truth. Lets hope Jason Compson never existed, but, he sure seems true to me.

A decent editor would have convinced this young lady to "fictionalize" her life story to make it saleable. Unless it really was just a shitty piece of pornography that shouldn't have been published.

I don't believe Matt actually ever read Moby Dick.

I guess the lesson here is this: truth is stranger than fiction. Some of the world events, if written as fiction, would be reviled as "implausible". If Tom Clancy wrote a book in 1991 that described the US invasion of Iraq by George W. Bush in 2003, it would have been universally derided. Another president Bush attacks Iraq? This time over some fabricated WMDs that didn't even exist? Bullshit!

This is in essence the problem fiction has, and why sometimes a good story must be packaged as "the truth" instead of a good yarn, because otherwise it will be implausible bullshit and no one will buy it. And I think this is what Yglesias was saying. Right?

It's not just all the chapters about cetology and collecting sperm. Let's not forget that in Moby-Dick, the putative narrator of the story fades into the background about a quarter of the way through and only pops up again in the epilogue.

Matt should probably avoid discussing literature, given that he seems to know very little about the subject, but the peanut gallery here has been unfairly cruel to his Moby Dick reference.

Here's what Matt wrote: "The verisimilitude of a lot of the mise en scène really is integral to the book's appeal, but the same could be said about Moby Dick and any number of other straightforwardly fictional works."

Note that he does not describe Moby Dick as a straightforward fictional narrative. Rather, it's straightforwardly fictional, in that it is a work of fiction that was not falsely marketed as a memoir. It's also hard to argue with his claim that the verisimilitude of the "mise en scène" is integral to the book's appeal, unless you want to be an ass and complain about the use of film-snob jargon to describe a book.

But I think Tyro nailed the main point in the first comment.


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